(N.B: After listening an outstanding number sung by U2 named "Ground beneath her feet" i was totally moved by the charm of it and decided to pen a poem with the same title. It's an inspiration not plagiarism!)
Her beautiful face struck through my heart,
And her smile made me feel,
To just prostrate on,
The Ground beneath her feet...
She entered my life like a divine being,
A beauty nowhere else to be seen,
The unforgettable moments i still hold in my memory,
When i saw her for the first time; in sheen...
Her melodious voice harmonized my heartbeat,
And rhythmic pattern of words so sweet,
Just compelled me to be,
The one who prostrate on the "Ground beneath her Feet"
wow, billz! Excellent piece of poetry :) I love the way it flows and creates images in my mind. The poem is short but it has the intensity to keep the reader preoccupied for a long time. I am particularly in love with the lines 'She entered my life like a divine being,
ReplyDeleteA beauty nowhere else to be seen...'
Great work!!!
For me there is a very mystical feeling to this poem. It describes one of those moments when another human being can raise us up to the level of the gods.
ReplyDelete@Q Wow! thanks a lot for your valuable comments. truly obliged that you like my piece of work:)
ReplyDelete@Sir John well, to some extent you're right. i have tried to describe the state when love gets elevated to very high level.
ReplyDeleteoh are available?:p
ReplyDeletelove it
blesses
@Hiba .... thnx alot
ReplyDeleteIn line with your grandpa The Great Majeed Lashari who was also a poet of Beauty.
ReplyDelete"The unforgettable moments i still hold in my memory,
ReplyDeleteWhen i saw her for the first time; in sheen..."
the beauty in this poem is again the way of expression. its simply awesome..!