Lets walk down the memory lane,
Lets chase some fun and forget every pain. . . .
Lets remove every doubt and every lie,
Lets cuddle each other, please don't deny. . . .
Lets dance endlessly into this night,
With sparkling stars as our guests and moon be the spotlight. . . .
Let me hold you close and look in your beautiful eyes,
I want your eternal loving for my entire life. . . .
Let me bow before you and ask with pride,
You're my ideal girl, will you be my Bride?
This is sure to melt your partners heart :p
ReplyDeleteGood work :)
Awesome words from the heart! Congratulations!
ReplyDeletereally nice words...
ReplyDeletevery nice! A strong expression in confessing love. ^^
ReplyDeleteawwwww.....sweet!!!!
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ReplyDeletehiba
So romantic.
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lets walk down:
ReplyDelete"With sparkling stars as our guests and moon be the spotlight. ..."
well simple diction and like the way of expression its simple but clear n yeah romantic...!
thanx alot everyone.... :) really appreciate your inputs.. :) made my day
ReplyDeletethe main thing in poetry is always the way of expression n in ur case its brilliant. your work in field of
ReplyDeletepoetry is so great. I love the themes of ur poems the optimism, harmony,peace n hope beyond all love
its just made me wordless...! well done n keep up the good work...! =)
Its superb :) I feel the emotions, love, patience n truthness in your poetry its smply awsum good goin ladky ; )
ReplyDeleteThis poem is so brillaiantly written, that I am penning it down in my diary... Totally in love with the words :)
ReplyDeleteThis poem is brilliantly written and I am penning it down in my diary. Hope to read more poems by you that will surely be a treat for eyes :)
ReplyDelete@Marballa Najeeb - Thanks a lot for you kind words. I truly appreciate them. :)
ReplyDelete@Haseeb - Thanks a lot! :)
@Aainee - Well, it is truly an honour for me to know that you are writing down this poem. I feel obliged and honoured. Thank you. :)